Want Me to Give You Feedback on Your Beginning?
Submit Your First Chapter for a Butter Makeover!
Heyo, Butter Writers!
You know I’m all about crafting hooky, unputdownable openings—the kind that make readers say, “Just one more page…” until suddenly it’s, like, 3 AM, and they’re leaving a somehow both angry and gushing review about how they couldn’t stop reading.
With that goal of gripping readers into helpless book thralls in mind, I'll be troubleshooting real first chapters in my upcoming Butter Beginnings Master Class—and I want to feature yours.
Does This Sound Like You?
❌ “I don’t know if my beginning is strong enough to hook readers…”
❌ “I’m not sure if readers will stick with my story long enough to get to the really good part.”
❌ “My loyal readers LOVE my books—but for some reason, I’m having trouble finding new readers.”
If so, this opportunity is for you.
I’ll be selecting a few submissions and showing you exactly how to slather butter on your beginning to help you transform it from a “maybe I’ll read this” to “I must keep reading this!”
📝 How to Submit Your Beginning for Consideration
🔗 Fill out this short form by…
📅 Deadline: February 6
If your beginning is selected, you’ll receive detailed feedback PLUS one of my short courses as a thank you!
🔥 Ready to Make Your First Pages UNPUTDOWNABLE? 🔥
Can’t wait to read your openings and help you spread the Butter! 🧈✨
P.S. Know a writer friend who needs help with their beginning? Share this with them! The more, the butter!